Loving the tone and the pace - looking forward to getting to know the characters- keep going - think it’s great to experiment as well - Substack is like a giant open notebook for creatives and somewhere to try that thing you always wanted to do. Made me scribble a few words late last night - will be starting a series next week -
I feel like you must've started being a legend in the first grade. Damn. I gotta see where you taking this. The writing was so ill and perfect and ice cold, i feel like you didn't miss a single moment. You ain't write this in three hours, my G! We both know that.
The start of something majorrr!!!
Sho ya right
Tone. Content. Voice. Suspense. Total package.
Check out episode 2: https://open.substack.com/pub/souljaworldnews/p/jordan-and-justin-a29?r=33jufj&utm_medium=ios
You got me hooked!
Loving the tone and the pace - looking forward to getting to know the characters- keep going - think it’s great to experiment as well - Substack is like a giant open notebook for creatives and somewhere to try that thing you always wanted to do. Made me scribble a few words late last night - will be starting a series next week -
Glad you liked this one! Thanks for reading, check out episode 2 if you haven’t, experimenting with different perspectives for narration: https://open.substack.com/pub/souljaworldnews/p/jordan-and-justin-a29?r=33jufj&utm_medium=ios
I like where this is going!🔥
Just the beginning
I feel like you must've started being a legend in the first grade. Damn. I gotta see where you taking this. The writing was so ill and perfect and ice cold, i feel like you didn't miss a single moment. You ain't write this in three hours, my G! We both know that.
Appreciate it my guy
Where are the comics?
Coming soon, coming soon this is just the pilot the artwork is behind the paywall
i did wonder that. I wish there were some comics here. That would've been dope. We need this with some comics woven inside the story.
I appreciate the funny dynamic between Jordan and Justin 😁✨